200 Word Challenge – Descriptive Language
Look at the picture below carefully and complete the table.
Check on the next page for Step 2.
| Who is in the photo? | The one that is climbing and the photographer. | ||
| What is happening in the photo? | The photographer is taking a picture of the climber. | ||
| Where was the photo taken? | At the mountains. | ||
| What makes this exciting? | By looking at them and feeling like they’re having fun. | ||
| How do you think the characters feel? | Climber: feels happy to climb all the way on the top.. | Photographer: the photographer is having fun because she is taking photos of the climber. | |
Write a 200 Word recount as either the CLIMBER or the PHOTOGRAPHER.
Remember; your challenge is to use DESCRIPTIVE Language to SHOW, not TELL your audience what is happening.
| Begin your writing here: today i receive a letter from mcc( mountain, climbing , company) they said on the letter it said , dear climber and photographer i’ve seen you on the mountain taking photos and i really love it i sent this letter because i want to see you again on the mountain taking photos .
So if you do, I will do anything for you from mcc(mountain, climber,company,) so the climber and the photographer accept it, they got really excited about it so they called the MCC and they said that they will accept it, so the MCC was so happy. So they hang up and went to sleep and then the next day they woke up and got ready to go to the mountain , Want they got there they got there gear and start climbing once they got up they started to take some photos , After that they got tired so they came back down and took their stuff in the car and they drove home then went to sleep.
And then the next day they post it and gave it to the MCC so after a while the MCC got the email and they were happy about it . that the end. |
